Darkness,
summons the ocean.
foams,
mount up
erupt,
and she
rises,
alluring.
She oozes,
sensuality
charm
femininity.
Her body throbs
with every wave
She moves
She sails
She fades...
With every breath
the mirrors of my consciousness
are fogged up
more and more
and I am not able to see
how deadly she can be.
She sings
She floats
on my bosom
over my belly
between my thighs
I feel broken
hurt
bruised
still infatuated
With her every move
I rise
I throb
with agony
I cave in.
With every word she whispers
I feel my unyielding logic slip
like a little fish
through the fingers of my conviction
she sings
for the lost men in the sea
mesmerized forever
Enthralled
with the sound of her voice.
The last siren they whisper in each others' ear.
She weeps
in my arms
for the deadly touch she owns...
I wash all the death
off my body
with her tears
and slip down with her
into the dark,
deep,
end of the ocean...
where I sing
where I weep
where she rises
and I fall
Where the victory
is all but mine...
Dec 18, 2010
summons the ocean.
foams,
mount up
erupt,
and she
rises,
alluring.
She oozes,
sensuality
charm
femininity.
Her body throbs
with every wave
She moves
She sails
She fades...
With every breath
the mirrors of my consciousness
are fogged up
more and more
and I am not able to see
how deadly she can be.
She sings
She floats
on my bosom
over my belly
between my thighs
I feel broken
hurt
bruised
still infatuated
With her every move
I rise
I throb
with agony
I cave in.
With every word she whispers
I feel my unyielding logic slip
like a little fish
through the fingers of my conviction
she sings
for the lost men in the sea
mesmerized forever
Enthralled
with the sound of her voice.
The last siren they whisper in each others' ear.
She weeps
in my arms
for the deadly touch she owns...
I wash all the death
off my body
with her tears
and slip down with her
into the dark,
deep,
end of the ocean...
where I sing
where I weep
where she rises
and I fall
Where the victory
is all but mine...
Dec 18, 2010
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ReplyDeletesimphanee wrote on Dec 18, '10
Hello my little MoonCake!
How did you know I was longing for poetry this eve? lol
Oh this is grand!.........!!!*o*!!!
.......................With every word she whispers
I feel my unyielding logic slip
like a little fish
through the fingers
of my conviction
simphanee wrote on Dec 18, '10
emeraldmoon said
I wash
all the death
off my body
with her tears
and slip down
with her
into the dark
deep
end of the ocean
where I sing
where I weep
where she rises
and I fall
Where the victory
is all but mine
A Divine blending with nature is what this conjured up for me.
Wonderful visions!
So nice to read you!
snowleapord wrote on Dec 18, '10
Power and beauty merge in your poetry to touch both my mind and my heart.
Thankyou, Negin.
simphanee
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simphanee wrote on Dec 18, '10
Thank you Jon, for saying what I also feel~!~
*(*(*(*(*(*(*(*(*(*(*( NegiN *)*)*)*)*)*)*)*)*)*
snowleapord wrote on Dec 18, '10
Negin's poetry touches both of us, Val.
simphanee wrote on Dec 18, '10
Deeply!
emeraldmoon wrote on Dec 18, '10
i don't think you guys understand what this means to me. to share a piece of me and receive this encouragement from you every time, i really don't know how to thank you.
Val i love the way you connect with what i write and get what i mean, and Jon i really appreciate how you feel my poetry.
Thank you, thank you, thank you
simphanee wrote on Dec 18, '10
Negin, this poem just made my heart bells ring! It is mystical and passionate, and grabbed my attention as it lead me to feel such love, and such longing for clarity, peace, respect.
I love poetry and yours is so vivid and rich!
So nice to see you on here too!
I look forward to more from you, as I love good inspiration!
Peace...........and............You are so welcome!!!
dpatrickt wrote on Dec 18, '10
I'm so glad you decided to post this, Neg.
Again, your masterful manipulation of rhythm--rhythym!--makes me smile wider than wide...especially at the end, like an accumulation of waves finally crashing out upon the shore. Beautifully wrought, khanoom! My test for good poetry is when I wish I had written it. Just so... just so.
Reading you is a little like scuba diving on the Great Barrier Reef in Australia. Who ever would have thought that the dark, turbulent and dangerous seas held such amazing beauty down there, such alluring and as yet un-named species of life!
La belle dame du reve-- thank her for me, will ya?
:-)
snowleapord wrote on Dec 19, '10
emeraldmoon said
i really don't know how to thank you.
Appear more often, Negin, that'll do it.
What you share of yourself, whether light or dark, is beautiful. Your poetry is your gift to us.
simphanee wrote on Dec 19, '10
ReplyDeleteI was dreaming of what it might feel like, to BE Mother Earth! I think your poem's passion
found its way into my dreams! lol
Lovely experience, it is! Thank you again!
Have a grand day!
emeraldmoon wrote on Dec 19, '10
dpatrickt said
like scuba diving on the Great Barrier Reef in Australia. Who ever would have thought that the dark, turbulent and dangerous seas held such amazing beauty down there, such alluring and as yet un-named species of life!
Patrickkk this is so amazing! :->
Merci Merci :)
emeraldmoon wrote on Dec 19, '10
simphanee said
I was dreaming of what it might feel lik
Val i actually dreamt of this and then woke up and wrote it down.so my dream found its way to yours...wow how we're all connected!
simphanee wrote on Dec 19, '10
emeraldmoon said
Val i actually dreamt of this and then woke up and wrote it down.so my dream found its way to yours...wow how we're all connected!
WOW is right!!!! That is just very cool~!~...Maybe Mother Earth is making Her presence known! lol
Thoughts certainly seem to have substance!
A beautiful dream, eh?
mysticmaze wrote on Feb 7, '11
Wonderful to find this gem, tucked away in my inbox! Lovely how it shifts the awareness... and takes all of us with you into the depths... :-)))